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Re: Are Viruses Alive?
Whether you classify them as alive or not, it doesn't really change what they are. [s] BlackGhost [/s]
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: Children's story
In the magical forest where animals could talk and play, Paddy, The friendly rabbit, hopped around with his friends. His friend’s names were Spot, the Ground Hog and Tweet, the ...
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: Der Liederbuch
Der Liederbuch The end will be so sweet with no pages left to turn, and no breaths left to breathe. I’ll walk into the grave, sans regret or parody, close ...
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
I'm back! I was on vacation for five weeks, and before that I guess I had just been neglecting YWS for a while because of school and stuff like that, ...
Aug 17, 2008 -
Re: A picture
My advice would be to study actual books so you can get a better understanding of how stories are developed. Because in truth, what you have here is very bare, ...
Aug 17, 2008 -
Re: The Voices Are Many
His parents don't know, because Austin is too afraid to tell them what's troubling him exactly. That's why I wrote this, to try to break people's misconceptions about the disorder ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: The Voices Are Many
Thanks for the review! Maybe it's my fault for not making it clear enough, but Austin did not kill anyone. All descriptions of death are actually in his own mind ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Motivation - Writer's Block? Procrastination?
Maybe your friend should engage in activities that causes him to feel inspired or creative. Because I know first hand what it's like to write when you have no motivation ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Need Mucho Reviews
Could you review the short story in my sig? It's a bit unsettling, but it's supposed to be accurate portrayal of someone who's living with Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder. I'd really like ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Hey Kitty! I was wondering if you wouldn't mind taking a look at this short story I posted? It's rated R, so please don't feel obliged to review it if ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Iron Man
That is so fetch. xD [s] BlackGhost [/s]
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: New Idea
I have to admit, it is a pretty cool idea you've got here. If you develop it correctly, it could turn into an awesome story. ^_^ [s] BlackGhost [/s]
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Punishment For Thoughtlessness
Hi! Before I critique, I'd like to say welcome! I hope you find YWS to be everything you'd hope for in a writing site. If you every have any questions, ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: ( Title Unknown) Chapter 1
Hello! A bit of fantastical creature fighting in a forest? Cool stuff. ^_^ In the brief momen of quiet, Just a little type there, I think you forgot a letter. ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Lullaby
First of all, I thought this was hauntingly beautiful. All the imagery, the surrealness of it all. Really, you captured the mood of this entire piece perfectly. I only found ...
Aug 15, 2008
